It is due on Wednesday 11am. September 18. More time for you this time lol.
Hers’s the Goals of the assignment:
-An effective thesis statement (that passes the ‘so what’ test)
a. Logical order
b. Follow your theme and CI
c. Consistency of person and number
– Integration of class materials
– Improvement on specified language points
PS: I love your last essay, you’ ve done great job, but here are some problems. Please pay attention to the logic and the organization of the whole passage and use more transition sentences, break the paragraphs and paraphrase the sentences from the given materials.