Application essay English Assignment

Application essay English Assignment

It’s an application essay, and I already wrote some parts but want you to rewrite it and add your thought to it. if it’s not good, they won’t accept my application essay. I can write it but I’m so stressed with class and it needs better time to write it clearly and sufficiently. Besides my trial, I will also attach my Friend application essay who are from the same country, came to the US in the same situation, but he applied for a different major and that was the last two years. So, you might take the most ideas from him but not plagiarism ( line to line ).

the questions look like this:

1. Please describe how you have prepared for your intended major, including your readiness to
succeed in your upper-division courses once you enroll at the university.

2. What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?

3. Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or
worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.

4. Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken
to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic
achievement?

5. If there’s anything else you want us to know about you, now’s your chance. But remember, you
should use this space only if you want to describe anything that you have not had the
opportunity to include elsewhere in the application. This shouldn’t be an essay, but rather a
place to explain unusual personal or family circumstances, or anything that may be unclear in
other parts of the application.

350 words for each question.
that means 5 pages * 350 words = 1750 words
So, I don’t need any title or question on the page but just to write 350 words on each page for each question orderly. As I said I’ll include my trial, and also a friend’s last year’s essay. I’m available anytime to add any necessary information.
Hope you’ll make me 😮
Thank you 🙏🏻

My friend essay from attachment:
the last 6 written word image including ‘additional’
from IMG 3010,11,12,13,14,15,16
are from my friend and just to take some ideas since we came from the same country with DV lottery but I’m from the capital city Addis Ababa and different major. Just to say Unplagiarized work

Thanks again 🙏🏻